You don't need a different animator. Your style is really fitting and one of the reasons i love it.
WOW. THAT GUY...
Takes alot of skill to shoot a fly.
this is so bad.
not sure if troll.
oh i miss the days when games were simply fun rather than "OMG LOOK AT ME NOT USING COLORS BUT WAIT THERE ARE COLORS THAT YOU GET ONCE YOU SACRAFICE YOU GOOD NATURE IN" bullshit games. the controls are slow but atleast responsive.
PROTIP: if there is no challenge there is no fun.
if you think that you can put this infront of me and make me think then your wrong. playing a game is meant to be a release from your daily life not "HERE, HAVE SOME GREY SHIT NOW MAKE IT LOOK BEAUTIFUL OH WHOOPS YOU NEVER EXISTED AND THIS IS A DREAM"
PROTIP: having the final screen just say 'end' surrounded by links is a bad idea.
the thing that really annoyed me is the message, or lack of. because when you stick things like that in there it's so vague that you just hope people make up their own meaning. also adding a message means you want people to think. and if you make it a platformer people will go "woo, time to jump around" not "OMG you're dead and shit's happenin" people go into games with different thought processes and you've gotten them mixed up.
you have a good artstyle and the music is nice. the game had some good ideas that were just poorly executed because you took the indie step. but all things apart from that it looks like you have some potential so good luck with that.
all this needs is an add your own song feature.
next time get rid of the dead pixels in the walk cycle.
Do you mind if i say how similar the melodies are to "scary monsters and nice sprites"?
Great song though.
How in hell are there so many authors?
The bass that comes in at 0:28 is too loud and the vocal samples need more reverb / delay.
The drop was not very powerful and the whole song just seems too repedative. Also try fixing the EQ on the drums.
All that said it feels like you atleast have some good samples to work with and the the synths just need some EQ fixing. Try adding in a light synth melody at the drop or just before.
I was working on this song during school with in ear phones.
So i cound't check the subbase at 28. I want to make an anti drop because
I want this to be chilling dubstep. When Im at home il fix those minor things.
Thnx for the helpfull review
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